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Thats awesome, even though its short its good. The shortest poem ever written was entitled "fleas" an it this was it: "Adam had 'em" thats a nice short poem

Good story! And your only 13?!? If I may make some suggestions: “Yeah, but I needed to talk to you about something more important,” he replied, (as fear emerged from ...

This was really good! Well done! It felt like I was reading a published article on Harry potter. I love how you end it too, its brilliant! Keep it up!

I really enjoyed it. I love the way you tie the 2nd line to the last line. Well done!

This is good, however if I may make a suggestion: The second stanza where you write "where she is..." "where she is..." "where she is..." I think is a little ...

This was really good, I like how you explain where you would read Harry Potter. It was very cool how you brought in the characters too

Yes I am I have written a seventeen chapter children/young adult fantasy novel that I began at age fourteen. I am in the process of editing my novel and polishing ...

This is good. I made the suggestions I found. Just a note, I think you could probably expand it more. I feel I am reading just the beginning of a ...

This is really good! I have made my suggestions, and you can either take it or leave it. “Can you tell us what happened?” They asked me. A simple question. ...

I limp into myself hiding before fear can find me againI am so afraidIn that darkDusty cornerI find a matchOld and unusedMaybe it can give me warmthThe strike is the ...

This is a great part. I have made suggestions, and you can either take 'em or leave 'em: As soon as I walked into the library, I hit the computers. ...

Good part of the story. Here are some suggestions I have made: The warmth in the air was not unusual. No, even in the cellar the radiator could create such ...

Chapter Two - ...Comes The Flighty Wanderer As soon as the overpowering combination of harsh soap and flowery perfume hit her nose, Ariana distinctly knew she was out of place. ...

Chapter 3: A perilous journey Trymissius heard the sound of boisterous hooves, as Heládran’s army rode toward the empty plain. “I told you, Heládran. I made it very clear to ...

This is well-written, its not a type of poetry that I read a lot of, but its well-written and I like the ending