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Re: The Place
The Place In a place where my mind often goes In a place that I go where no one knows I see a place A happy place A place full ...
Aug 11, 2008 -
Re: The Oppressed
You treat me bad Because I am not as smart as you You treat me like I’m worthless Because I don’t speak the same language as you You treat me ...
Aug 10, 2008 -
Re: Criner's World
I like it because most fantasy/science fiction type books' plots have already been taken, but there are few settings like this. I'm interested to see how it will start to ...
Jul 9, 2008 -
Re: Criner's World
okay. i like the setting and what you are trying to do with it. however, i feel as though too much focus is being placed upon the great book and ...
Jul 9, 2008 -
Re: Criner's World
Ok, here's the beginning of a story I wrote. If you can find some time to review, please do. I need all the help I can get. Thanks! Hi, my ...
Jul 9, 2008 -
Re: The "what if" game
What if your whole life was a dream, and when you "die" you basically wake up from your dream?
Jul 9, 2008 -
Re: Add a sentence!
Ok, so I'll start with a sentence and then you guys keep adding sentences. It gets funny... ok so here we go: On a rainy night, an old man came ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Death Row Secret... Chapter 1
Ok, here's a little thing I wrote. I don't know. It might be a bit hard to understand. If it is, I am truly sorry. This is part 1. Reading ...
Jul 8, 2008
