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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Place

    The Place In a place where my mind often goes In a place that I go where no one knows I see a place A happy place A place full ...

    Aug 11, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Oppressed

    You treat me bad Because I am not as smart as you You treat me like I’m worthless Because I don’t speak the same language as you You treat me ...

    Aug 10, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Criner's World

    I like it because most fantasy/science fiction type books' plots have already been taken, but there are few settings like this. I'm interested to see how it will start to ...

    Jul 9, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Criner's World

    okay. i like the setting and what you are trying to do with it. however, i feel as though too much focus is being placed upon the great book and ...

    Jul 9, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Criner's World

    Ok, here's the beginning of a story I wrote. If you can find some time to review, please do. I need all the help I can get. Thanks! Hi, my ...

    Jul 9, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: The "what if" game

    What if your whole life was a dream, and when you "die" you basically wake up from your dream?

    Jul 9, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: Add a sentence!

    Ok, so I'll start with a sentence and then you guys keep adding sentences. It gets funny... ok so here we go: On a rainy night, an old man came ...

    Jul 8, 2008
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Death Row Secret... Chapter 1

    Ok, here's a little thing I wrote. I don't know. It might be a bit hard to understand. If it is, I am truly sorry. This is part 1. Reading ...

    Jul 8, 2008


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