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to be honest i wasn't expecting much coming into this with the title 'school assignment' etc. :P but to be honest it was a well written poem and i do ...

wow, that was a really great poem in my opinion. i couldn't say anything negative about that, im sure many people will know how it feels in your position. Although ...

From your poem this is how i received it; its about you or someone else not dreaming anymore as it wont come true, you remind yourself that you used to ...

Welcome new members. this site will help you expand your poetry skills and to read other poems categorised in the genre you like. Most of all you can practise your ...

i know where your coming from when you say you will act fine infront of people but just want to escape.. in a way everyone is like that, some of ...

i do like your poem. although im not quite a fan of some of the sentences which end in just a word. but that is just me

pain, so sharp why wont it go away dissapointmet in their eyes i dont want it to stay, the urge to run as far as i can get maybe i ...

you have a very good character, and really like this poem

that was really good, your dad sounded like a good man