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Hello I will be reviewing your poem today. Well I read your poem and I did enjoy it although could use some improvements in the following areas: -Commas, fullstops etc. ...

I really like this poem, the punctuation and capitalism are used very well also. I really couldn't suggest what would be needed to improve it. Although I'm not a big ...

We used to be friends a long time may I add, It's like you forgot, everything about that! I don't talk to you now, I wonder if you still think ...

Hello I am going to review your poem. RED: corrections/opinions/errors BLACK: normal Black paints the most colorful sunsets, sorry to say but this doesn't quite make sense as sunsets are ...

Hello, I am going to review your story/poem. Well i thought that you did use your words in a clever way. You kept the story entertaining through out the story ...

Shining from the crowd I am destined to be, hopefully one day; people will see. I'm not an ordinary person you could tell if we spoke, but you don't have ...

To be honest, I didn't find this poem to be that great. You chose a subject that you hate yet you don't go in depth of your feelings or emotions. ...

Thankyou for your feedback, however when I write a poem i don't notice or care in this matter if i make a grammer error and such. I don't like to ...

thanks for the feedback, i don't write a poem then punctuate or capitalise it. I just submit it the way i write it. Thanks anyway

This would be categorised in a 'short story,' the spelling could use improvement also. However I think this story has great potential and I would love to see similar stories ...

Im not really a fan of repeating the 'i cried' etc. but in this poem i thought it was necessary. Unlike all your other poems this one comes to me ...

Unlike some other poems i have read recently, this poem had caught my eye. Good grammer, good plot and i could easily tell what you are talking about. The text ...

Unlike some other people, I thoroughly enjoyed this short story. It included many unique elements into making it a good shortstory. Some improvements could improve more descriptions in your sentences,

the choices ahead may change my future, the stress is too much destroying what i've worked for. life so far has been too great im losing my fortune- in luck ...

Your poem is quite good although needs some work in the following areas; -You should find the meaning of words before you use them. -The pace of this poem isn't ...