writingaway

woops, ignore the extra poem in the middle which is red.. i may have accidently pasted it twice :S

Hello, I am going to review your work today. Red- corrections/errors/opinions You may have the perfect hair, You may have the teeth, You might have the perfect air And grace, ...

Wow, this poetry was very appealing. I understood where you are coming from as I also am a fan of the Harry Potter books and movies.. This inspired me to ...

Appearances are 'over rated.' So why do I still care? Everyones opinions, everyones stares. I've changed myself, more than I should. It brings back memories of my childhood. They made ...

THIS is really GOOD! I can definitely relate to the whole thing. Also it kind of made me wonder what the background to this was. You could of gone on ...

I definetely like the flow of this poem and i enjoyed reading it from start to end. Keep it up! ,writingaway

Hello I am going to review your poem; (red is corrections, opinions etc) "I don't care," You say, As if you Not caring Makes it better. Makes it all go ...

I liked this short story a lot. Although at some parts i couldn't quite get the point across. Altogether i did like it though, but it wasn't one of the ...

Overall I did like this poem. Although there are some improvements you could use; -some times it seems as if you force your rhymes -spelling errors etc. -capitalism needs some ...

Wow, I really like this poem. The rhymes flowed aswell as the whole entire thing. The rhymes didn't seem forced at all which is hard for people to do, including ...

overall i did like this poem, i really liked the second stanza too! You brought the point across, in my opinion. I actually do like this poem, keep it up! ...

It's not that I lied, It's more that a kept. The trust, the deceit it'll make you upset. I'm keeping it from you, so you don't get hurt. To tell ...

WOW, this story really caught my eye. For some reason i can relate to this story. You used descriptions well, and also capitalism etc. The only think i could say ...

i really like that poem, that's really all i can say. KEEP IT UP!! ,writingaway

Hello,I am going to review your poem. This poem to me actually reminded me of the other day when I was trying to get my friend to come out to ...