writingangel24xx

I read this chapter, but unfortunately didn't read the other chapters before it. I'm guessing I just read the climactic event of the story. Your story sounds really professional and ...

I like the idea of this novel. Although it was a fantasy novel, the dialogue from a mortal perspective was very believable..lol if that makes sense. I also didn't want ...

This was good and believable. Keep up the good work!

I think it could use more descriptive language. The story line is nice but its seems very plain to me.

I can't wait to post the second chapter once I get more reviews! Hopefully that one is better than the first :)

This was interesting. I thought it was very original but when you introduced the characters appearances I thought you should be more subtle and not just state them. But it ...

yayayaya!

This is really good and it actually rhymed which was nice. It was pretty obvious but I think it is reasonable that a king should long for freedom. All kings ...

I really enjoyed reading this and look forward to reading more.

Sounds like this will make for an interesting novel, but I think it could be even better if you choose more unique imagery and words. Maybe you could add some ...

Lana shook her dark wet locks as she sat down on the old rocking chair by the fire, towel drying her wet hair, mesmerized by the rain pouring endlessly against ...

This was quite good and I wanted to keep reading it..although in the beginning of it I thought it was a cliche novel like any other..but I had to admit ...

This was good and I liked the imagery, but the fact that the grandpa is there makes it less scary because he seems strong. I wonder what will happen. It ...