writing_music_life

Hey everyone, I'm new. Duh, I have a post working on the new version but still critique. Anyway I'm a movie obssesed bookworm. Any questions just pm me. Hope to ...

Definetely want to read more. Good job on the chapter. Sean and Mandy, I don't really know kind of what their purpose is they aren't doing much. You could have ...

Unlike the others that said it was confusing I understood what the first part was. If you don't write more I will cry! It was AMAZING!! Like wordartisan the feelings ...

This is my first post. The chapter isn't done yet but I'm kind of stuck. Can you help? Critique is needed. Question and Answer PREFACE This family is obviously the ...