writewannabe

That's just me. I like books that end on a happy note. Or if it is a series, such as one of my favorites The Left Behind Series, I am ...

I read the Giving Tree too. I really liked it.

Another part of the prompt was to use a word like farout or groovy. My favorite is Awesome. As for contractions, I was told it is better to write the ...

lol! Opps.

Thank you. I felt the final battle was way better than the first battle. I drive an hour each day to work and most of this chapter I planned in ...

Thank you. I am glad that you like this so far. But I do have a confession. This is my third rewrite. The original story is totally different than this ...

Thank you. It seems like my typo, gramma and spelling mistakes started to slow down a bit.

Thank you. I have three more chapters to post, then I will go back and polish this up. What did you mean by inverted commas?

Yeah I am pretty modest and feel awkward when it comes to a romantic scene. A kiss here and there is all that will go in my stories.

Thank you. A lot of helpful people are leaving suggestions and telling em where my spelling mistakes are. I have about seven more chapters to post. Then I will go ...

Modern Day Robin Hood means "Super Hot!" Thanks for your coomments and suggestions and I will remember that about using Italics when she is talking to herself. I have seven ...

I don't want to say much about why she is not freaking out, because I don't want to spoil something. But thanks for the comments and as you can see ...

Thanks for the critique and that is a good question. I don't know how Melisande invaded her body. I guess her spirit or mind. When I am done with the ...

I did run each chapter through Word Spell Check a few times, and fixed what was caught. However, I know spell check is not perfect and does not catch all ...

Maybe I should make Maria confused too. Have her interrupt herself while reading, then figuring it out.