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Thank you. I will work on the editing. This was a story I wrote for Nano 2009 and am sure there are mistakes I could not find. The only thing ...

The village was a small place. While people still lived there, most of the houses were in poor condition. Some looked like they were going to fall over any minute. ...

Note: If you read this chapter and then go on to read the next Chapter 3 Part B, bear with me since I didn't get a chance to edit that ...

Maria stared out of the window in her room into the courtyard below, smiling with excitement. Far below she could see the people going about their business. Why was she ...

Not bored from writing it. I just wish I could be on this site a lot longer but I work and try to do 50 hours of stuff into a ...

I made corrections as the reviewers suggested. I also worked on describing the setting. Thank you everybody for the feedback.

I got this edited and hope to get feedback.

Very well written and can't wait until the next chapter. It is an interesting twist of how you portray Satan "Dreico" and God as bein best friends. It is like ...

That has potential. specially if the old an is a bum residing at the airport.

Andrew Peterson A tall businessman in a dark gray suit ran through the large terminal at Pittsburgh Airport. He glanced at his watch. "Oh shit!" said Andrew Peterson to himself. ...

Note: This was based on a writing prompt that takes place in a restaurant that is the size of New York City. The year is 3000. My MFC has a ...

Plus in a way it is something like an allegorical fantasy story to compare the biblical prophecy of the end of the world. There is a supreme ruler, people died, ...

I don't consider this to be spam at all. I just happened to like the image but no, I have not seen this one, as far as I know. I ...

I had decided to review some of the older stories, the ones from 2005. I did a few reviews and I was told that I should not review the older ...

That's just me. I like books that end on a happy note. Or if it is a series, such as one of my favorites The Left Behind Series, I am ...