writewannabe

I think this is very well-written. I think I noticed some choppy sentences. However, these were already bought up by the other reviews. So I am not going to repeat ...

I used to belong to The Young Writer's Club years ago. I was searching for it and found out that the site was closed for good. There was a link ...

Is there a way to change your user name? I might want to change mine to something more creative.

I will get the rest of the chapters posted as soon as I can. From what I understand, I can only make two postings every 48 hours. So I will ...

Thank you for the suggestions. I am not good at description but I will go back and comb through it.

The classroom scene actually happened to me. I had a teacher who asked me what I did with the money I was given for handwriting lessons. My writing is sloppy. ...

Thank you and thank God for Word and spell check because it did find many spelling and gramma mistakes. Just think of the character talking to herself in her head ...

Why are we limited to only two posts within a certain period? Do these limits go up the more times we post?

I think this is very well written. I can't think of any suggestions except for line structure. Some of your lines anr a bit longer than others. Maybe you did ...

Maria lay in darkness. She could no longer feel Luke's fingers crushing her windpipe. She lay there suspended in numbness. “Am I dead?” she asked herself. Then the pain returned. ...

Fear filled the young woman’s heart. She ran through the woods. Something was chasing after her. Because the fog was too thick, she could not see what this thing was. ...