writetolive

I wish I could show this to the kids at my school. But if I ever met you, I would want you to. Because they affect me in ways that ...

that was really smooth and it flowed really well. It's all annoying, because your the one. i think you should've used a stronger adjective rather than annoying. Maybe cruel? and ...

It has a good flow and rhythmn to it so good job on that. It's a bit vague like alwaysawriter pointed out. In my head, a boy I see. But ...