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I wish I could show this to the kids at my school. But if I ever met you, I would want you to. Because they affect me in ways that ...

Thanks so much everyone for actually taking the time to read and review it. I really appreciate it.

that was really smooth and it flowed really well. It's all annoying, because your the one. i think you should've used a stronger adjective rather than annoying. Maybe cruel? and ...

It has a good flow and rhythmn to it so good job on that. It's a bit vague like alwaysawriter pointed out. In my head, a boy I see. But ...

This was different and interesting because it was from the viewpoint of a prisioner. I think if you added punctuation though, it would be way easier to understand and read. ...

I'm sorry dad that i couldn't be, all that you expected out of me. i know i disappoint in everything i do, and even though you hate me, i'll always ...

This poem hits close to home for me. I have high-functioning autism and i know exactly what it feels like. Good job.

i wish my first poem was this good.

Wow. That was really long. It must have taken a lot of skill to write a poem that long. I liked the title a lot and your poem was very ...

that was really good. but thats probably because i love deep meaningful poetry. good job.

What i like about this poem is that it's real and true. Good job.

Life was a game that he was in, Whatever he did, He simply couldn’t win. Marked by the pains and tragedies of his life, He felt so alone, So he ...