writerwithacause

A/N: Hello, readers! I'm back from my holiday and ready to work on my novel again. I've been pretty inspired these days, especially after I found so many beautiful paintings ...

Well, they don't talk to me... but I don't make them talk either. I mean, I am just staying there, doing nothing, and I hear them talking in my head. ...

You can bet I am! It's my biggest project I've ever worked on...

A/N: Hello, everybody! Fast update, eh? :P This is the last chapter I am adding before I leave for Spain. I am going to be absent for all the next ...

A/N: So, did you think I've abandoned this story? No way, but behind this story, I have a life. And I've been trying to live it to its fullest. Plus, ...

Reviews, anybody? :)

Reviews, anybody? :)

Nice poem. I've only one suggestion to make: In the line: ‘Cuz sooner then light travels, replace 'cuz with 'cause. There are also some punctuation marks that you've omitted, such ...

You, debonair, you paint sparkles in the moonlight While some could never thrive through the day . All the city folk look at you in a blue light ; Strangely, ...

First of all, I'd like to tell you that I enjoyed reading this. Here are just some of my suggestions, feel free to ignore the as well, cause your poem ...

I can hear in you the hum of Electric lights , papery-wasted skin, hair, a chemical crimson waste of color ... The hue of whorish lips, a monstrous, bloody smile. ...

Memories of her starving to see us eat, (I like the association of words here.) memories of her sick and weak, memories of how hard it was to take action, ...

Some punctuations corrections: It is raining -- Steady and consistent ; I am alone -- Safe and consistent . It is dry where the people are , But it is ...

Delilah had always liked Manhattan. Good start for a short story. I always like it when authors go straight to the point from the beginning. :P She remembered her first ...

For having done a lot of reviews. xD