writerwithacause

Hello, Carlito! :) I have a new romantic short story (kind of like a letter that is not expected to be read): It would be great to get some reviews ...

Dear Mr. So-Called Artist, Each time we revel ourselves in tender caresses and half-stolen kisses you become a painter and I – your blank canvas on which you paint so ...

You would probably call it my wrong turn but I say that it was fate for me to walk on that road again. That cold dark road that in my ...

Good grammar and punctuation! I enjoyed reading it. I have no suggestion, your piece is well-done! :)

Here are some corrections that I've made: She sat in bed, a place that she had not left for 2 days. Never had she felt this depressed or lonely. Every ...

"Don't you see we cannot be together anymore?" I said , holding back tears that threaten ed to come. "But, Rachel you know how I feel about, and I know ...

Well, I'm pretty much into the oldies. From classical music to the '80s. Blues, soul and rock and roll melt my soul. So, some of my favourites: Aretha Franklin Etta ...

How can I tell you Just all that you are? Words dance at the tip of my tongue, - love this line, wonderful personification And yet, other words seem so ...

I think it pretty much depends on which religion are we talking about. Somebody once said on a website, that if we all were buddhists, there wouldn't be any wars. ...

For me, Wuthering Heights (the book) was better than the old black and white movie. Although I haven't seen the whole movie (just sequences), I can bet that The mists ...

Your poem is nice and you have some good figures of sppech. Here are a few corrections I've made: Rain drops are falling outside my open window - I believe ...

Here is my suggestion: It's raining again, but Why do I feel so sad when it rains? Rich droplets slide down my face , - I would have used another ...

Not bad, it is simple... but you could have worked on the rhyme and rhythm a little more. I am not praising rhyme in any way, as there are many ...

Good day! (: I have a new story, I am new to this website as well, so a review would be very useful. Here it is, just one chapter: Thanks ...

A/N: Alright, this is my first story on this website, so let me tell you what's it about. "The Red Rose" is a story of a courtesan, told from three ...