writerwithacause

Hello, Isha! It would be nice if you could review my novel, if you can't read all three chapters, feel free to choose whichever you want from these three. :) ...

Well, first of all, the title should be spelled this way: Too bad summer's over. Next, I'll make some corrections on the text: The constant beeping in the background was ...

Such an original view upon suicide! I would have never thought of it as being a gift for someone dear, as being something completely un-selfish. And with this concept, you've ...

And there are two reasons, Justin and Mike. Justin and I have / had been together for one year and three months. "For" requires Present Perfect or Past Perfect. We ...

A/N: Okay, guys, this is a shorter chapter, not so romantic as you've been probably accustomed to, but quite relevant in the development of the characters. I'm pretty sure that ...

"Yeah, it's his new mix-tape." said Max in an irritable tone. It is -> It's. Also, before words that begin with a vowel, you should use "an". "Nice. I like ...

Thank you very much, Georgie! It was written in one of my inspirational moments, hehe! Thanks again!

Thank you! :)

First of all, don't leave two line breaks between parahraphs. It is disturbing for the eyes, for mine at least. =D Secondly, this is an ample story, I imagine. At ...

Here is my review. I've written my personal corrections with red, and the phrases that I loved with blue. White. That’s all I see. Even though it’s completely pitch-black, I ...

This is very good, I second what those above said. I like the ending as well. I love when writers leave it up to our (reader's) imagination.

This is very beautiful! I don't have any suggestions, it is simply wonderful! :)

I watch him, dazed, in the silence of the great music that filled the room is bare , yet he has filled it (also, I don't think "bare" is the ...

I liked your style and descriptions. As the user above said, you have to put some parts between inverted commas. The girl felt, because she could not see Ophelia smile ...

This was a very well-written story! Well-detailed, and the grammar was perfect. And I dare to contradict seeminglymeaningless, actually having a description in the beginning (just like you do) works ...