writerwithacause

When you're young, you never notice what's going on What's happening outside In the life you have never lived When different origins? say how bad life can be -- perhaps ...

Wow, this was such a great poem! I shall like it! Punctuation's perfect, grammar -- flawless, and your style is great! My favourite part was the beginning: The diamond girl ...

Broken pens , Screwed up paper , Wrist cramps . Frustration ! Sore bum , Sore eyes , Aching back , Aching thighs . -- I loved these first two ...

I miss you. I hate how it's true. I love you. The words I wish Ididn't feel. -- nice stanza, simple yet beautiful. I hunger for you. The feeling roars ...

I miss you. I hate how it’s true. I love you. The words I wish I didn’t feel. -- nice stanza, simple yet beautiful. I hunger for you. The feeling ...

Hello, Dreamwalker! I enjoyed reading your poem. It was an easy read, and pleasant too. I've had a look at what other users said, in order not to repeat myself. ...

Hey, ultraviolet! This was such a great read! I loved your association of the process of writing (marked by the word "ink") with different human emotions, present in every stanza, ...

And I saw such majesty in her eye That I could not look away from her; Such splendor, such brilliance was the sea That I felt I would burst with ...

Dramatic indeed! What a profound poem I spit out bullets and suck in lives, I create orphans and widowed wives. I am a tool of human desperation, You begin straight ...

La noche La noche Dreams, No, dreams aren't for the satisfied, those in love with what's real, those not clinging to the paraphernalia of time, -- hm, not sure if ...

I will begin by saying that the way yu end your lines and start new ones is, in my opinion, wonderful and original. The only suggestion of mine (feel free ...

Anybody else willing to review?

Thanks to both of you! :)

Thanks, Kitty! :D

I have fled from the path, That I long knew was right. I have chosen to descend -- perhaphs that it is a better word? And not to arise. (start ...