writerwithacause

Wow, you're really good! You must have a lot of patience, hehe (the one thing I lack xD). I love your flowers and dinosaurs. The dog's pretty cool, too. Actually, ...

Hey, Twisty! Hello and welcome to YWS! I hope you have a nice stay. That's pretty cool that you love historical romance and romance in general, I haven't met many ...

Heya, BanditToph! Welcome to the boards, and to the site! This is a good place for improvement, I'm sure you'll like it. :)

Welcome back, Crocks. I am new here also, so I don't know you. :D I hope you'll have a pleasant stay this time! (so that you won't leave again... :P)

Hello, Psudiname! :) I have a novel, and I need motivation to continue with it. I could use some feedback and some constructive criticism. Here is the link: Thank you ...

The sight of you, made my knees go weak, and I wondered if you still cared. The sight of you, made miss all the things we shared. The sight of ...

I wanna curl up like a cat around you and hold you tight. I wanna hug you and never let you go , Shelter you from the darkness and keep ...

Oh, wow. Strong poem, strong feelings that I get from reading. Your way of starting the poem is great. With that dialogue, you make the readers focus on your poem. ...

Somewhere amidst the aquamarines , -- aquamarine is rather an adjective, but I suppose you can turn it into a noun as well. Where the breeze never plays without a ...

Been sitting in this room Trying to think of the right words to say . Truth is, I may not be perfect Or know all the right things to say ...

Goal: 30. Completed. Whooooray! : D I aim for 40 reviews now.

Hey there, Cspr! You have a good poem here, I like how you write and how you combine words to attract readers' attention. Here are my favourite parts: Thereabouts we ...

Yes, I have to admit, I expected some deeper meaning as well. But I can not say you've disappointed me. :P You should, though, add some punctuation marks: There is ...

Poetry is indeed not all about rhyme and rhythm, I agree with you, BoZi. It's about feelings, emotions. You remebered me with your poem about my childhood. I just hated ...

Hehe, what a nice poem! I don't think I've read a poem about skin before! At first, it seemed a total nonsesne, but the ending sum it up very well: ...