writergirl007

This is a sweet poem, but ver cliche. I like the comparison however. I love the bridge idea. I usually like poems that rhyme, which yours doesn't. But that is ...

I don't believe that there must be a tragedy for the love story to be genuine. I do believe that there needs to be a conflict between your main characters, ...

"Can you believe he made a moveon..." It should be "move on." "Just then a not fell..." It should be note. This was good. I agree, a bit more detail ...

I found a few errors, but nothing major, and I think someone else got them all. :D I thought it was good, a little bit more description might be nice. ...

Okay, so this idea just came to me and it's probably horrible, but I wanted to see what ya'll thought. Critiques are welcome, no matter how painful they are. Verse ...

This was really good! I love your style! It is marvelous! I also like how you incorporate God into your story! So...don't be too mad at me when you read ...

For everyone who enjoys this one, there is a sort of revised copy in Fantasy Fiction under the same title. I am trying to work on it however. So...Just wanted ...

Hey Scribe! Slow down! And, Jules, they are all this long! Unfortanately! Lol. Jk Scribe. I promise you a longer review! Would you do me a favor, however. I have ...

Hey, Mandy! You write! Yea! I can't wait to read it! I have a prior commitment though! But I promise, i will get to this as soon as possible! Although, ...

This was good Scribe. But I must be honest. It was not as well written as your previous chapters. I also found some very minor mistakes that need to be ...

Okay...God did say to defend our country in times of war! In the old testament, The hebrews wiped out entire nations under God's command! Would you sit back and watch ...

The problem is however, that the state should not have to regulate laws. So I retrack my prior statement. People should have self-government...not have others deciede for them. This is ...

Abortion should be illegal! Abortion is taking a actual human life! In the Bible, which is just one source for my argument, it states that all humans are alive at ...

This is is just really short! No background, no character nothing! So...please lengthen. I do realize, however, you would like everyone's thoughts first. Please elaborate however. As for the story ...

Excellent! I like this as well. I thought it was the perfect length! Although, if you wanted to make it longer, I would suggest giving more detail of their journey ...