writergirl007

I...well. It was well...Look, I don't mean to be such a critique, but I really didn't like this. I found a lot of mistakes, and I have an adversion to ...

Thank you. SOrry. I haven't checked my work in a while. It was kind of something I just did on a whim. I hadn't really thought about doing anything with ...

This section is a bit confusing. I can't keep everyone straight and what is happening. Are the boys listening to the conversation? I thought only one person was arguing with ...

Excellent! You have helped me realize how I need to write. I love you're signiture! You are absolutely amazing! XD I have never read so good of a writer who ...

This was absolutely amazing! I hope you continue it! You must! I beg you! You are an excellent writer. I hope to be like you one day! Such detail and ...

THis was amazing. A little sad at the end. WHy didn't she escape? :( Oh well. I'm not the writer. I did have a few comments. Not as many as ...

I like this, but I don't understand the story! Who does she like? Does she liek the first guy that talks, Ben, David, or Chris? Another thing, you just introduced ...

This is quite interesting. I really like it. But, I do have a lot of suggestions. 1. "her need to seem perfect to keep control was becoming far to excessive." ...

This is an interesting peice. I have never read anything like this. But, I am confused on the plot and the story. Did you have a prologue to this? Just ...

This is so short! Add some more to it, build it up. It is good, but it can be better. Of course, mine can be better too! Lol.

Nice job! I decided to go ahead and edit this tonight! (Or this morning! Whichever.) Hope these help! (Again) XD. 1. "prepare to face the two greatest enemies to his ...

Of course, I must say it is marvelous! I am honered that you would want a young girl's opinion of your amazing work! Lol. I must say, I love the ...

Perhaps that was a bit dramatic.

Please! Anyone BUT Clinton! Her husband was bad enough! I'm sad to see President Bush go and do not want Hilary to win! America as we know it will come ...

"The cries of a child, a baby, rang out clearly and sharply into the night." Don't use both child and baby. Just one or the other. "The cold air froze ...