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  • Romantic Novels Re: First Kiss (Part 1?)

    This was so sweet and romantic I just had to comment! I absolutely loved it! XD. The only thing I found wrong was that it wasn't long enough!!!

    Sep 5, 2007
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Conflict With a Confounding Relationship

    Well, it was okay. It has a lot of incorrect sentences. And a lot of errors. I just skimmed it. But, I would suggest reading it again. To find all ...

    Aug 29, 2007
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Shakespeare-- Genius or Fraud?

    He was a genius. His plays are phonominal. And a lot of writers take their greatest work from true events. Historical fiction works are great examples of this. Also, a ...

    Aug 29, 2007
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: My Summer Romance

    Thanks all. Like I said, it is all in my head and I need to get it written down first. This was just to see what people thought of it. ...

    Aug 21, 2007
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: My Summer Romance

    Thanks everybody. ANd Jabber, no you didn't offend me. Your comment, I think, was the nicest. But, I know it stinks. Mainly, I am trying to get the whole story ...

    Aug 11, 2007
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My True Love

    Are you trying to make me cry? I love it. It is so sweet! And true. I didn't know you can write poetry! *is sad that she can't, and a ...

    Aug 11, 2007
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: My Summer Romance

    NOTE: This is not finished yet. I just wanted to see what you guys thought of it. My friend gave me the idea, but it is dedicated to my one ...

    Aug 8, 2007
  • Fantasy Novels Re: A Changeling in Afanadar: Prologue

    I see you started a new story! XD I will critique it...but not today. *Sigh* Why do they all have to be so long? Lol. I suppose I owe you ...

    Aug 8, 2007
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Expect the Unexpected

    This is marvelous! I know the first part is not yours, but even what you have added is amazing! I really like it! Even if it is a typical romance! ...

    Aug 8, 2007
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Please don't leave

    I love this! It is very sweet. I agree. I could be longer. But...that's just me. I like it. XD Keep up the good work. 007

    Aug 2, 2007
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Marquis de Sonfield

    I agree with comments above. Sadly, this is how all of my stories are and I find this one fastinating! *Sigh* I will have to change my writing a little ...

    Aug 1, 2007
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Guardians

    Hey. Okay, yes. More reviews. I'm pretty good at that. ;) So...here we go. 1. "When the village council found that her mother, Irene, could spellcast, they broke into the ...

    Aug 1, 2007
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Guardians

    I would make a new post or say Revised at the beginning. I am going to review it again! XD I just want to help you become a better writer! ...

    Aug 1, 2007
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Guardians

    Hey cutie. How are you? Don't think just because you are my BF, that you are getting off easy! XD I did like it though. You had me wrapped up ...

    Jul 31, 2007
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Song of the Secret Keepers

    XD That's okay. My suggestion would be to read it on YWS after you have posted it to see if everything fits. Just a suggestion. I really like it, but ...

    Jul 30, 2007


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
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