writerchick416

"Please. May I please have my journal back." My voice found a certain lightness and my facial expression became serious. " For some reason this part doesn't seem entirely right ...

Hi :) Okay, great story. i got a little bit confused in one part, but it was still good. I didn't see anything wrong with your grammar. You should try ...

This is my first chapter and I'm looking for suggestions on what to change. In need of some help as I'm stuck at an editing/idea standstill for this chapter. This ...

After a long wait I see the next Chapter of All Babies are Blessings has been revealed. Amazing as were the other 13 chapters. I liked it a lot and ...

People have to ask you what words you use everyday mean

A very good starting concept to a story but not enough to quite understand. I can't really identify with this character at all and I'm not entirely sure why she ...

Great story. No immature typos, or grammatical errors that I could find. I read both parts 1 and 2 and I have to say this was absolutely hilarious. I was ...

I give you a 6/10. Not bad and paints a good picture i especially love the line "English gardens weren't meant for rain, but rain always fell." It has a ...

Death

Nendo stood in the midst of the bustling crowd, his eyes trained on the blue sky spread above him. 5.5/10 I'm around long enough to see who Nendo is and ...

I see the basics have been covered; 2:1 ratio, grammar, ect. However, you are not writing like an author who knows your character. What you are writing is much more ...

I found a writers' group at a local Barnes and Noble. It says all are welcome on the page description on the B&N Website and I couldn't find much other ...

I know you're supposed to give suggestions when you critique but I don't think i can even bring myself to demean such a beautiful piece of work. I just read ...

I like the format. A diary is unique as well as a way to be able to jump from event to event without having to worry about connecting them or ...

Navigate away in disgust huh? More like plead for the next part. I agree with 100xstupid, a little hard to follow but I'm assuming that it will get easier as ...