writeholic

Hi just tell me what you think please! Timeless As I stumble along a midnight path The world around me opens long forgotten eyes As I see and hear with ...

Thank you so much! lol sorry I actually copied and pasted the wrong poem, my final draft has all of the commas and grammar errors already mentioned. I was actually ...

Very sad and dreary but in a good way. I got the impression of suicide- hope that was what you were trying to imply. My only suggestion would be to ...

Great poem... I love people to comment on what my own poems make me think of, the part where he died for me, he loves me, etc. I happen to ...

I wrote this kind of on a whim- tell me what you think Rise of Dreams Smoothly do they glide Smoothly do they set The stars upon them twinkle Infinitely ...

Just something I wrote... Sorry about all the metaphors.. tell me what you think! The Continuation The wheel continues on, Turning in broad light With others looking on Glory staring ...

Hey sorry I've been out of town for like a month..... :) OnCeUpOnAtIm3Xo : woops sorry I should have worded that better, I've published two poems, and I've written a ...

Hey Y'all my name is writeholic. I'm pretty new to this site, and It looked like a great place to introduce myself (even though I'm pretty boring) I live in ...

ohh goodness. I'm in something called writers association in my school, and people send their papers to us for an edit. I spent one day reading about 20 papers on ...

I wrote this for a contest and won it. I'm just about to submit it with three other poems to a larger contest, but I made some changes to it, ...

Hey thanks so much! Yea, I'm having a bit of trouble with some of those rhymes, they don't seem to want to come out right. I really like your suggestions, ...

I like how mysterious it is, I'm a little confused on the symbolism....But I think that it has a kinda repentance to the narrator, like he's been tortured by some ...

ohh goodness I can't agree more. I have a guy friend that did that to his best friend, she was dating this way cool guy, and then he just pops ...

I actually really like it, but to keep your four line stanza you need to have it written like this It’s quarter past three and the book is shut I ...

That was excellent. I've written poems that rhyme all the way through that long, and its sooo hard not to break the rythem and the rhyme scheme. I love the ...