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The party goes on, there's a full house. Just having fun. Things sore through the air. Suddenly, your muscles freeze when you hear glass sha tt er The is music ...

Wow, this was a very intruiging poem. I liked the rhyming. I agree that it was very powerful. Short and to the point. This is just a poem that I ...

Aha, I love this. The rhymes and flow make it easy to read. I really liked the way you added humor. Great job! just orange peel and apple pips I ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! This was an emotional piece. I loved the words you used and how you placed them. I feel this tickle in my stomach Ticklish, yet soar ...

Thanks for all the reviews guys. Yeah, I guess I was being a little hard on myslef. I recently decided that this is going to become a flashback in my ...

I don't think I'll put up the whole story on here. I just want to know what you all think of the prologue. Doesn't really explain much. And I don't ...

Yay, you do have the music! Awesome!

Ooh, I love this. I would totally sing this! Have you put it to music yet? Chorus: Because it's a long way back from "loving you," And it's a lonely ...

Chapter 5 Adapting I hadn’t realized a burning, scratching sensation in the back of my throat until Carlisle noticed me swallowing constantly. He said it was hunger. “Is that what ...

Wow-o-wow.! Your writings are amazing! I went to go read your first and second installment and couldn't stop saying wow. These are so descriptive! There were no mistakes from what ...

Very vivid and emotional. Loved this! That’s when the tears start. Setting my cheeks a fire because I’m so embarrassed. They're streaming down my pale cheeks, onto my lips, my ...

Wow, very nice poem. I love the emotion in this poem. It was easy to read and it flowed nicely. Great poem! Keep writing! Becca

This was an okay poem....You need a little bit more emotion and descriptions in this poem. It doesn't really catch a person's eye. Make it more interesting. I like the ...

Wow, very nice poem. It was so moving. I loved it! The wind is so cold out by the river; the air has turned an indifferent grey. Clouds shed soft ...

Wow...I didn't know that there weren't that many options for us young writers. I'm glad that we have to help us improve our writing and get constructive critism. This is ...