wordartisan

I love this. It really reminds me of Katie with the last line, and how she is separated from her best friend (you know?). I like the title that you ...

This was really amazing, and I really don't have any hard criticism. I think that I understand the world you are trying to portray, and I like but I am ...

I love the way that you write. You are able to put so much emotion in. I love it. I really like the emphasis on the way that she judges ...

Chapter 1 I carried the burden of a thousand black horses, pounding over the night in a furious rage. Their eyes were red like fire and their manes were gray ...