woolmittens

hey these are nice. are they connected in some way? or are they seperate? u have some really pretty phrases. the idea of the last poem is a bit trite ...

thanks for the crit especially the 2nd one(niteowl) which was nice and harsh. this obviously needs work and i'll be sure to do some on it. thanks again wm

when he died it was snowing like this hard and hard and icy and hard nadia said to me you must hate the adminstrators if they'd canceled school he would ...

hey. i seem to be a bit more harsh than everyone else around here so dont be offended or anything. u have some really nice imagery, here's some comments u ...

i like this version much better. ending is perfect :)

babygirl she was reading a poem about a girl who got her cherry popped thinking about perverted things but mostly sadness and the size of her thighs she was waiting ...

hey wulie (cute name) im not sure how serious people are in their critiquing around here so dont get too offended k? And I swear I wont let you win ...