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Re: Escaping Truth(Part 1)
Hello! I don't have time to read this. Which means that a lot of other people don't either. I suggest trimming it down to at most 1,000 words. I'll be ...
Nov 14, 2009 -
Re: Hymne À L'Amour, chap. 1 & 2
Hello, I'm Kate. I have to say this was pretty well written and I think you have a true talent in writing. Although, you have areas where I think you ...
Nov 13, 2009 -
Re: The Daring Heart-Chap. Three
Thanks, Jayleigh. I completely agree with you. I started chapter one of this story while I was waiting in the doctors and never thought to continue it. I need to ...
Nov 12, 2009 -
Re: The Daring Heart-Chap. Three
**Please read chapter one, "Following Your Heart is Hard To Do" and chapter two, "The Daring Heart-Chap. Two" before reading this one. You certainly can read this one first but ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Following Your Heart is Hard To Do
Thank you guys so much for all of your opinions. They truly mean a lot to me! :) I will write more as soon as I can!
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: The Daring Heart-Chap. Two
**This is a continuation from the story named, 'Following Your Heart is Hard To Do'. I really didn't think that was a good title, so I changed it. I believe ...
Nov 2, 2009 -
Re: The Deaths from the Easter Bunny We Mourn
I don't write much poetry, but I agree with Kamas. The rhyme is off, and I think you could go back in a sort out a few sentences as far ...
Oct 30, 2009 -
Re: A pretty waterfall :)
Wow!! This is so pretty. Perfect book setting..I think you may have just inspired something!
Oct 25, 2009 -
Re: to learn to fly -- prologue
Hello, I'm Kate :) Wow! This is great! You captured my attention from the very beginning. I love the fact that the twins are so close. This is a very ...
Oct 25, 2009 -
Re: Following Your Heart is Hard To Do
Thank you both for your compliments and for the review. I completely agree with you, TenYo. I will go back through and edit. Thank you for pointing these things out ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: Following Your Heart is Hard To Do
**This is my first romantic story and this is based off my own experiences. As always, tell me what you think.** As we walked step by step, shivering under our ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: The Simple Truth
I found this very interesting. You have a completely different view than me, but that's one thing I like about it. Wouldn't you think that being strong is about knowing ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: Ask me if I'm a tree
Hello, I'm Kate. :) I loved this. Very nice.
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: The Suicide
Hello, I'm Kate. I'm not going to bother going into grammatical errors,because it has been done, and there are none too pressing. I simply want to say, I love this ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: Romero and Julia
Hello, I'm Kate and I'll be reviewing you. (Funny how a lot of us start a sentence like that.) This has some good potential. I like how you have Romero ...
Oct 23, 2009
