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Re: Unthinkable chap 1
Bonjour! I did not read this..I am commenting to tell you that you need to keep your pieces under a 1000 words if you want reviews. Most people don't have ...
Nov 24, 2009 -
Re: An old story I want to pick back up
Bonjour! I'm Kate. I really enjoyed this piece and encourage you to finish it. ;) The curiosity of the first 'part' was wonderful! Hmmm..could we be dealing with a mystery? ...
Nov 24, 2009 -
Re: Jason Keane: Taking back Lisa Patterson...Part1
Bonjour! I'm Kate and I will be reviewing your piece. You had my full attention from the very first sentence. I loved the action, as well as the setting. You ...
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: The Letter That Started Everything (Excerpt)
Bonjour! :) I'm Kate and I'll be reviewing you today! I liked this pretty well, and I definitely see where it has great potential. Today. A two day. Horrible, horrible ...
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: Paper Piano-Chap. One
Thank you guys so much for reviewing. I definitely do need to go back and fix the grammar parts. I just wrote this story down quickly one night. And, by ...
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: Dialogue Grammar
Your a life saver. Thanks!
Nov 21, 2009 -
Re: first part of my novel. no title yet.
Hello, I'm Kate. I really liked this! With a little editing, this will be great. All I noticed, specifically, is that you use choppy sentences. Use commas! :) I suggest ...
Nov 21, 2009 -
Re: Paper Piano-Chap. Two
Before you read this one, I suggest that you read Paper Piano-Chap. One first. Enjoy! ******** “Oh, it’s perfect!” A black, grand piano stood in the middle of the café ...
Nov 20, 2009 -
Re: The Silent Killer. CHAPTER ONE
Hello! I'm Kate. I see that your new, so your excused, but you are suppose to review at least two stories before you post your own. This story has potential. ...
Nov 20, 2009 -
Re: xLogan's xTravagant Reviews!
Hello! Thank you so much for reviewing my last story. Sorry I haven't sent the next chapter to you, it's been on hold. xD This is romantic fiction, which I ...
Nov 19, 2009 -
Re: Paper Piano-Chap. One
Hey guys! Thanks so much to the both of you for commenting. I wasn't sure what other people would think. I am glad that you guys liked it! I really ...
Nov 19, 2009 -
Re: Paper Piano-Chap. One
I sat at my piano, looking through the rain stained window watching my best friend drive into my families driveway. His black BMW came to a slow halt, then I ...
Nov 19, 2009 -
Re: xLogan's xTravagant Reviews!
It's fantasy fiction...consider it? Gigantic, colossal, huge, thank you.
Nov 15, 2009 -
Re: Argavon-Chap. One
I pushed my legs to go faster through the snow white forest. My heart was pounding so loudly, I was sure they could hear it. My face stung as branches ...
Nov 15, 2009 -
Re: Taking Over.
Hey Logan! I'm Kate. I love this 'opening' and really encourage you to finish it. Much to my dismay, I do the same thing all the time. Start writing a ...
Nov 15, 2009
