wonderingkate

Hey guys. Thanks very much for taking your time to read my story. Rena, I didn't mean to make the layout like that. I don't know what happened. I will ...

Hey, Hope! This was great. You captured my attention from the very beginning. I would like to see where you take this. There are only a few nit-picks! But she ...

Bonjour, Jessey! I thought this was pretty good. Although, you have things you need to practice on. This is just me, but I would watch your grammar. Too many grammar ...

Okay guys, tear it apart! Enjoy! ****** Whether it was from the warm, purple twilight, the sweet smell of roses, or the sounds of the little, brown finches fluttering around ...

Bonjour! I didn't see any mistakes either. Just thought I would say that I absolutely loved this. Post more soon! -Kate

Bonjour, Elinor! This was pretty good, but as Meg stated above, you have a few things you need to work on. I didn't find much grammar errors, so you should ...

Bonjour, Lethero! Sorry it took me so long to review this. I really enjoyed reading this story and can't wait for you to expand. There are very few grammar errors! ...

Before you read this, bare in mind that this story doesn't have the most exciting take off. I am working on that, and help would be highly appreciated. Enjoy! I ...

Bonjour! I'm Kate. I liked this, but you left me wanting more! Although, that's a good thing. :D Grammar: “I was actually looking for you,” She said in a nervous ...

I wonder why God gave me such a blessing I wonder why God thought I deserved it I wonder if I can ever repay Him. I know I take my ...

I may expand. The only reason I didn't was because I thought you should let your imagination finish her story for you. :) I may come back to it. Thank ...

Before reading this, I suggest you read/re-read Paper Piano-Chap. One, two and three. Enjoy! ****** I woke up the next morning more tired than I was when I went to ...

Before you read this one, I suggest that you read Paper Piano-Chap. One and two. Enjoy! ******** Logan and I sat motionless in the car, listening to the radio. He ...

Bonjour! :) I am Kate. This story was so sad! I want everything to turn out okay. Consider writing more? *begs* Nit-picks: The whole world was shaking, no, not the ...

Bonjour! :) I'm Kate. I really liked this story, but (there's always a 'but' isn't there?) I found a few things that you need to clarify. First off, what happened ...