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Re: The YWS 2009 Yearbook
YWS is truly a writers best friend. Every time I log in, a little flurry of renewed inspiration flies through my finger tips. I haven't been here long, but I ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: Love Stories
Hey, Ollie! I know your new, and so am I, so I don't know, but I think there is a specific place for questions. Anyway, to try and answer your ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: Arabella (For now)-Prologue
Yes, I know it is very short. Please tell me what you think anyways! Por favor! ****** I stood in the middle of the cold, brick building lifeless. All of ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Another Girl
Thank you very much for that wonderful review! I will go back and edit this. As I have said before, I've just begun to dabble in poetry, so I don't ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: The Wolf Pack Ch 1 + part 1-2 of ch 2 edited.
Hey, Leth! This is brilliant! You definitely fixed all the grammar errors (As far as I can tell). I love how you added Lethero's dad into the story. I can't ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: Another Girl
Okay guys, here is another one. I am a tad embarrassed about this one, but on the other hand, I really want to grow in as many ways as I ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: My names Kate...
Bonjour! My name is Kate too. =] I am so glad that you joined YWS. I really like it here and I bet you will too. Here are so more ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: The Vampire's Story Volume 2: The Truth Chp.1
Bonjour! I really like this plot. I almost started crying in some places! Idiot, I thought as I crawled off of him, how can you tell him something that isn't ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: My Sister and I
Once again, I am sorry about the layout. It must be my computer. I will try to fix it soon.
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: My Sister and I
Twin beds in a raggedy old motel lie waiting for someone to occupy them. The sun had decided to sleep hours ago yet the Texas heat is as draughting as ...
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: This Is For Real (part 1)
Bonjour! The plot of this story is wonderful! I got wrapped up in the emotions of this story from the very beginning. You have grammar mistakes, but I'm not going ...
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: We'll Never Know
I’m sorry that I wasn’t good enough I’m sorry that you felt that you had to choose But now I’m sorry that you chose. Because now we will never know ...
Nov 30, 2009 -
Re: Alone?
I have begun to dabble in poetry. Please, tell me what you think and anything else that may advise me in the right direction. Thank you and enjoy! ******** Why ...
Nov 30, 2009 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
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Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Dying Love
Hey guys! Thank you all so much for taking the time to read this. I really appreciate it. I don't have any intentions to continue this either. Although, I may ...
Nov 29, 2009
