wonderingkate

Here's the link to the first part! Enjoy! Hours later, Seth is grabbed around the ankle, thrown onto another hard ground, and is kicked in the stomach repeatedly. He groans, ...

Hey, Ollie! This was beautiful. I really liked it. I think a lot of people can relate to not feeling good enough for the person you love. Keep writing! I ...

Hey, Mage! I thought this was great. You described everything well, but as Mia said, the ending was a little confusing. I'm not going to go deep into grammar, because ...

I’m sorry to tell you that this is not a story of love and joy. It is a story that most of you will never be able to understand. The ...

Hello, I'm Kate. This was great! I really did love it. (Which is saying something xD) I hope you begin writing the other chapters soon. You did have punctuation errors, ...

My feet lagged as I stumbled down the dark wooden stairs after I was called for dinner. I’m dreading having to look Mom in the eyes. I know I shouldn’t ...

Ugh, sorry about the layout. I really don't know why it does this sometimes. :(

I wrote this paper earlier in the school year and now my teacher assigned us to revise it for semester finals. I would really appreciate any one's grammar reviews or ...

Hello, I'm Kate. This was nice. I want to know what happens! Just my opinion, but maybe you should end the date in the first chapter because this chapter was ...

My feet tapped along to the punk rock music blasting in my ears. My curly, dark brown hair blew in the wind as my Mother drove down the interstate, swerving ...

P.S. I would like to thank gsppcrocks and night owl for being patient with my questions, and answering them superbly. You guys are awesome.

Yes, another beginning to another story. Please bare with me. I can't seem to finish a story. However, I am in love with this one, so wish me luck. Reviews ...

Hey, I'm Kate. I see that you are new, so welcome to YWS! I should let you know, although you have probably already been told by the mods, that there ...

Hey, I'm Kate. This is great! I don't have much to say, except maybe you should add more detail to his ears? Also, I am just wondering, why did you ...

Hey, I'm Kate. I loved the first one, as well as this one! The plot is very intriguing. I can't wait for you to post more! You did have grammatical ...