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Re: Small Steps
Hello, I'm Kate. :D I really enjoyed reading this. You have a talent for enticing readers! Also, I believe you did a great job delivering the message of what every ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: Dirty Jokes
Hello, I'm Kate. :D I don't write poetry, and have come to terms that I am not good, so I am not going to critique you. I just must say ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: Ignore
Hello, I'm Kate. :D I really enjoyed reading this. You did a great job. I love reading stories that are well done grammatically! If you continue this story, please PM ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: Vampires Kiss part 1
Hello, I'm Kate. :D I really liked this. Also, you are right; this does have a lot of potential. One part of this piece I loved so much is that ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: Her Life With Me
Hello, I'm Kate. :D This was great. You captured me from the very first sentence. I may be the only one, but this definitely was a tear jerker. :( Which ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: Found
Hello, I'm Kate. :D I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you continue. The switch from Olivia to Alec was brilliant! I love it when authors/writers do that! Great ...
Jan 25, 2010 -
Re: Newbie says HI!
Hello Erika! Welcome to YWS! I love to write fiction as well. I can't wait to read some of your writings. I hope you enjoy YWS as much as I ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Essay-Help please!
I would highly appreciate a grammar review, title, as well as any other comments. To give you background information, my class is learning about the Watergate Scandal and I was ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: Laugh at the World
Thanks everyone! I truly appreciate all of your comments. I will go back and try to spruce it up, keeping in mind what everyone has said. I am still very ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Ben & Beth-Prologue
Dear Elizabeth, By the time you read this, I’ll already be gone. Please don’t try and contact me. I am doing this for your own good. You are in the ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Laugh at the World
Who cares what you think? I’m afraid that I say I don’t, But I do. Who what I think? Sadly enough, no one, But me. Who cares what I do? ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Go Away
Here's another poem. I know I need to improve, so please criticize with that thought in mind. Thank you very much! Mistakes are made That you can’t take back You ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: Love
Hey, Classy. Kate here! I think you should post your art in here more often! Your pretty good. I do draw myself, so I know how hard this is; you ...
Dec 17, 2009 -
Re: Sadness(for now)-1/4
Thank you guys so much for your comments. I truly do appreciate them.
Dec 15, 2009 -
Re: Sadness(Title Help?)-2/4
Thank you!
Dec 15, 2009
