wonderingkate

Hello Star! :] Welcome to YWS! :] My name is Kate. I love to play piano. I would every moment of the day if I could. :P What games do ...

Hmm... I kinda agree with the others. I can't tell if I like it or not. I can definitely see grammar and punctuation mistakes, the rhyming didn't flow well ( ...

I really liked this. It makes you think; which is always a good thing. :P Sorry, I don't write poetry, so I can't give you very helpful tips on how ...

Hi Silentpages! :] I absolutely love your introduction! I think it's awesome that you used to be home schooled. Are you going to a public school now? I just graduated ...

Hello, I'm Kate! :D I can tell that you wrote this with a lot of emotion. Great job on that! Putting your emotions into words is never easy. I'm not ...

Hello, I'm Kate. :D I must tell you that I have not read all the chapters. So, I hope you don't mind if I give you a review anyways! This ...

**Please critque as you see appropiate! I am having a hard time choosing a title, so suggets on that would be highly appreciated. Thank you for reading!** Chapter One Too ...

Hello, I'm Kate! :D I liked how you definitely created a place where I could easily slip into what was going on, and imagine the setting well. Although, in my ...

Thank you guys all so much for the wonderful reviews. I do plan on writing more, only I have a horrible habit of stopping after the first few chapters! :( ...

Ah, purely brilliant! Thank you so much for this article.

Hello, I'm Kate. :D The YWS member before me covered the grammar pretty well, so I am only going to add my suggestions. I think you have a pretty good ...

Hello, I'm Kate. :D I really liked this. You definitely need to tell your friend that he is a very talented song writer and that he needs to continues to ...

Deadly Secrets Prologue My time behind this waterfall- my perfect world- is coming to an end. I can’t avoid it any longer. Fate has finally worked her way into my ...

Hello, I'm Kate. :D You did an excellent job at capturing my attention. As well as adding the perfect amount of suspense! As silly as it is of me to ...

Hello, I'm Kate. :D I really enjoyed reading this piece. I have read many romantic fiction stories, and nothing has been quite like this one! I like the fact that ...