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Wow, I really liked this, it sounded like the shower scene from Psycho or one of the horror stories your ten-year-old cousin always hears in school and likes to repeat ...

I thought this poem was good, especially for a first post. It was quite realistic and the meaning was quite clear. One thing though: And stuck it close you Now ...

This kind of reminds me of my cousin's ex, though she didn't kill herself :). He never grasped her hand real tight, When they walked alone at night. I think ...

I liked this and the way it shows how technology is killing us etc. Especially with the current economic crisis, if we turned virtual would everything just go to ruins? ...

This made me laugh, my Spanish is not very advanced so I can't spot any mistakes (I don't think there were any anyway) but I loved the ending =)

I wrote this in like ten minutes (tbh, it isn't my best) but I felt like I needed to write it because some stuff has happened recently with somebody in ...

Awww this was so cute! I love the little part about the cat, it was sweet. Sorry this review is pretty much pointless!! ~Dommy lol same here I loved it ...

This felt like a scene from a chick-flick, I liked it quite a lot. Guess the mistakes are already covered but I don't think there were that many obvious ones.

Thanks for your comments! Croxteth is an area of Liverpool. A schoolboy called Rhys Jones was murdered on the way home from football practice in the car park of a ...

Nice, though I don't really understand where you're coming from but I think I have an idea =).

Wow, I loved it, the portrayal of the emotions was very strong and, I'm no expert, but I don't think there was anything wrong with it =).

Loved it, though I think you put a semi-colon in as a type error at the start =)

I liked this poem and the description was really strong but the rhyming seemed a little off towards the end.

I'm up to about 10,000 words and I haven't written anything in a few days but that is going to change by next weekend. It's about a young boy from ...

The sunlight glints off the polished blade, A blinding message to the sky. The blood is still dried on one edge of the metal And the emotions haven't yet been ...