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Okay, this is a really long, really random poem that I just kept writing and writing until it ended up like this but I hope you enjoy it: The street ...

I write because it makes me happy and lets me truly succomb to the strangee worlds that reside in my imagination :). I've been writing since I had the ability ...

Great poem. Couldn't find anything wrong with it =)

I liked the emotion and the way you portrayed the community's reaction to Francis. It's always the same, no matter where you go, if you ask someone about their street ...

LOL 10/10. Aren't we all?

Loved the whole thing, the emotion was overwhelming! In a recent visit to the Vatican I realised just how much some people want to find God and they look so ...

Loved it and it's kinda true =)

I liked the imagery and the way I don't really know what the main character is crying about, but it scares me anyway =). I loved the whole thing but ...

lol. I really liked the description in this, it was great! I would suggest putting the lines in one stanza a little closer together as it made it a little ...

Hee, this was a cute poem, kind of reminded me of the advert that's going around (for Orange, I think) where a cyclist is saying stuff like 'I am the ...

Wow. The language made me shiver, no-one in my school seems to own a dictionary so it seems so new to me =). I really liked this even though I ...

I liked this and if it's true then I can't imagine how hard it was for you. Just one thing: you didn't invite me to your precious wedding with whom ...

I have been through the same thing myself just last year and I think your poem was a good expression of the emotions that you feel when it happens. It ...

Wow, that was really short! I didn't really get it, but I liked the language that you used. One thing, though: Her presence stole the room, Heads turned. Hearts filled ...

This seemed a lot like a mcr song and I really liked it. A few things, though: I will see you I swear I will fined you Shouldn't 'fined' be ...