wolfgirl13

Not sure about the last verse or the title? Please review and critism is welcome :) ************** Poppies grow among the mossy stones, about and around them; Some rest their ...

Hi This is really sweet and it sounds like it comes from the heart. I really enjoy it. Maybe instead of leaving it pure and simple (which is great) you ...

Yes girl :D Your English front cover. I told you it was good. :) And I'm never wrong. Tehe Keri xxx

Wooop!! You put them on. I think that they are both amazing. Especially to be immortal. It was amazing when you and Emily performed it. And even Miss. Cheshire loved ...

Emilyemilyemily :) You know I adore the things you write. This is probably the best. I seriously think you should write more.

Tinkling water, peacefully running downstream, Sounding like bells, far away in the distance. The sound of the Elephant's footsteps, Like drums, crashing and banging. Thunder sounds like cymbals, Keep

Make a brainstorm of each character before you start. You don't want them to start acting out of sorts for no reason.

Hi I'm new but your story is really touching. Death is always a tricky subject. I agree with borntobeawriter, there is no real pain or emotion about the death. Selim ...