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Re: Defy the Light
This is really sweet but I don't quite feel any emotion. :S Keep writng :D -K xxx I'm sorry that it was a really short and terrible review ;) x
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Pebbles, Hero of the Tortoises
Just a fun poem about my friend's Tortoise :D No one knows what Pebbles does, Some say he's a Tortoise hero. But I'm just glad he's mine! One story that ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: all these tangled thorns
I really like this. :) It almost made me cry. It's so deep and I love your style. :D Keep writing -K xxx
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death
I LOVE this. :D It's so funny and I love the writing style. In my opion it could do with a better intoduction, but the one you have got isn't ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Scars: Impending Storm Chapter One
I would love to write a novel with my friends, but sadly none of them like literature as much as I. :D I personally would take out the 'Noob' part, ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: deleted
:D this poem is awesome I t's really good I love your pieces x
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: In the Arms of the Angel: a Short Story
Hi Wow! You're really talented, this is amazing. You made me feel like I was there. I love you description of the lake. Keep Writing. Keri :)
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: Please, please just give your opinion - even if brief.
Hi Wow! This is really good. I love the fact that it's so true! You write just like my friend, yet your style is so much more distinguished. I love ...
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 1
Hey It's a really good first chapter. My only problem is that it's a bit fast paced. Everything doesn't need to happen now, you can save some of your secrets ...
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 1
Hey It's a really good first chapter. My only problem is that it's a bit fast paced. Everything doesn't need to happen now, you can save some of your secrets ...
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: What am I sposed' to do?
Yeshh! Woop! I really like it because you expect guys to be so unemotional about this kind of stuff, but you're not, but hey I already knew that. ;) ly ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: The Gold Watch (chapter 1)
Wow! This is really good. Can't wait to read more. I love your wide use of vocabulary, maybe this is just me but I thought Ronnie and Jackie were brothers, ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: Sam
The second one - the edited one has alot more depth and feeling to it. I love it. Keep writing. :)
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: Defend me, oh Chivalrous Knight (EXTENDED)
wow! Are you sure you're 12? This is amazing! I don't think i have ever been able to write as well as you. You have a gift. Keep it up. ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: Broken Glass
Wow this is amazing. You could work on your grammar and spelling, but its got a really good ploy. Can't wait to read more :)
Feb 7, 2011