wolfgirl13

How did you do this? Personally I prefer the first one as it's simpler and there is less to look at. The second one fo me is too busy but ...

i think you have a great writing style. I was really into it until i got to “Here, most likely…” I tried to shake off my mood, putting on a ...

You are a very talented writer. The pace to begin with was quite dreary and slow, but just as I was thinking of exiting, you kick-started my imagination and your ...

Thank you :) I think it was meant to be from Peregrine's point of view but I'm not entirely sure either. I am so bad at grammar so I'm not ...

Reviews and helpful critisim would be much appreciated. The plot is a tad complicated, so much so that even I sometimes have problems with it. My mind is like a ...

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Tehe thanks :D No I have no idea who the rebels are, everyone is asking- I really should come up with an answer. :) - K x

tehe :D

:D Tehe Tehe Tehe! Glad you liked it. x

Sure would love to. I just fail at anything compute related. :D

I have no idea who the rebels are. :D I guess it's just nonsense. ;) Thanks Guys :)

Eeek I fail at IT ;) x

Heyy I think this new piece is definately better than the old one. :D I really like the lines : It yearned to be free, to be exhaled into the ...

Do you know how to get them to work. x

Ok so this probably won't work as I have no idea what I am doing, but if it does work then I have learnt something :D 1. This is a ...