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Re: The screaming chaos somehow bottled in the thing called me
Hey :) I really do love this, and there really is nothing to nitpick except maybe... I guess I 'd better decide pretty soon because at the moment I’m wasting ...
Sep 20, 2011 -
Re: The Dragon Tamer - Chapter 4
Chapter 4 (Yeah I know they're all being posted so fast but i have 10 chapters on my computer that need posting!) A sharp slap brought Sre back to her ...
Sep 20, 2011 -
Re: I Am Aware
Hey :) Your overall writing style is fluet and I love the language you have used. There isn't much to nitpick but I will anyway. ;) This type of insanity ...
Sep 20, 2011 -
Re: The Witches Gem
Hi, I love the overall briefness of the introduction, it really sets the scene. Nitpicking really isn't my thing but I do have one small quarrel, some of your 'I's ...
Sep 20, 2011 -
Re: The Dragon Tamer - Chapter 3
Chapter 3! :D Roscrow had watched his men move the eggs one by one back to the tavern. They placed them with infinite care into a large, padded basket. Fire ...
Sep 20, 2011 -
Re: The Dragon Tamer - Chapter 2
Second chapter of The Dragon Tamer :) The next 10 months were the closest to hell on earth Sre believed there ever could be. In order to "repay her debt," ...
Sep 20, 2011 -
Re: The Dragon Tamer - Chapter 1
Rated it 16 because of sex scenes (yes I know I shouldn't but it didn't quite work without them :S) Please be nice, but I'm not sure i shall be ...
Sep 20, 2011 -
Re: Roaring Dragon
1. This is amazing!! 2. How the do you get pictures up on here because I don't seem to be a able to. Pressing the like button now!! :)
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: God's Creation
I'm athesist and don't believe in God, but I love the way you have written it and it's very powerful. You have an amazing writing style and very good grammar. ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Through the Eyes of a Werewolf- Ch.1
I love you for writing about werewolves. :D I really love your style of writingg!!!! More of things like this pleaseeee :D -Wolfie
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Chapter1 & Prolouge
N'aww they probably wouldn't suck. :) Yeshh I know I'm terribly crappy at spelling, and ICT. :D I don't like the brother either, he's kinda modelled on me ex-boyfriend because ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: "Wreckage"
So hi I read this and I though wow. But I have one main problem. I hate the use of the word suddenly. I just can't stand that word. You ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Look at what you've done.
I really love your style of writing but as it's written it feels too jumbles. I think it would be better read if it were to be in a column. ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Letters to the Front Line
I really like this poem. I love the way all the letter are addressed to different people. I don't know if it's me but I think although they are addressed ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Not As They Seem chapt. 1
Chapter 3 now please :D Unlike freewriter I love vampire stories and this is so different to the ones I normally read. My eyes were literally glued to your words. ...
May 29, 2011
