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Thanks angels-symphony :D ! This really means a lot to me and I'm going to go join right now :)

What about the day of the prom or dance or something. Everyone will be all happy and excited and stuff. Just a suggestion Good luck! ~Wolf

Hi I'm still pretty new to YWS and writing in general. I started getting into reading a couple years back, but only recently have I discovered that I can actually ...

Once again, great chapter! You keep dragging me deeper and deeper in to this story. Anna Graham is right, you definently have a grasp on the human mind. I like ...

Hey KJ! Wow, this has got to be your most intense chapter yet! I could feel my heart pounding as I read this. I can't even imagine how I would ...

Oh My Gosh! Why can't this be a book so I can just turn the page! Ug! Great cliffhanger by the way. It was great, just like the rest of ...

This is amazing! (once again) There is so much emotion in this chapter and you illustrate it so well. I really wish I could write as good as you do, ...

Oh my gosh! I absolutly love this! You left such a cliffhanger at the end of this chapter and I'm DYING to know Alonsa's story. I just love a good ...

I agree with Karsten, you went a little overboard on the descriptions. They were good, just repeated and over done too much. You have a good idea here and I'm ...

Hm... definitely unique. Though there are some things I need to address. The main character, is it a boy or a girl. And what does he/she look like? Also, it ...

Hey KJ! I'm loving this story so far (probably because I have such an obsession with post-apocalypse societies.) But never mind that. You have done so much better in this ...

Very good!

Hmm... interesting, but I like it. You could go a little more on the characters and the setting. Keep writing because this sounds like a promising story. A six-year-old killer... ...

I am SOOOOOOOO writing these down in my jounal. I've been in desprate need of a list like this. THANKS :D

The Hunger Games is SO one of the best books I've ever read! After reading it, I could not pick up another book because I couldn't stop thinking about it. ...