wizkid515

this is a wee bit longer than the other one but it still needs work tell me what you think If you have somthing else to say to me just ...

hey i haven't even started properly but i need to know what you think Chapter One: The gravel driveway crunched under Jame's feet as he began his morning run into ...

My first story was Fantasy (as all ways :lol:) it was about a boy who had to go on a really long journey to find an evil man who stole ...

HI guys and gals My Name is Josh and i like writing and reading my fav colour is blue and i hate spiders i heard you could become a greeter ...

:thud: WOW! this story is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO cool i can't wait till i can read more of it as fair as i could see there wasn't any grammar or spelling errors ...

Hey your story is great i can't wait to read the rest. I don't understand is Sera deaf or not you had a few typos but they have already been ...

hey i love this story and can't wait for more :thud: your details are amazing and i can't wait to reveiw the next chapter i couldn't find anythind wrong (i'm ...

some of your sentences sounded a bit strange and i want to know why she would decline his ride and the hop on. your story sounded cool can't wait till ...

Hey your story is cool, sweet and WE WANT MORE i think this should be made into a novel or longer story can't wait to see if you write more. ...

Hi i think this poem sounded a little weired. (No offence) you had some grammar mistakes but i won't go into them. you ending sounded a little disappointing. this should ...

hey i love your begining i think that spark bright sounds a little fairyish but still love the story :shock: :lol:

Your story is sooooooooooo cool. can't wait for other work from you :lol:

“Chris, hurry up with that potion lad, we have to go soon,” called Chris's wizard master named Kirin. Chris was upstairs in his small study finishing a potion he had ...