wizkid515

*tears rain down* OMG this is.. the most beautiful thing i've ever read. well done. *Bows Respectfully* you should continue. i hope you make it in to something wonderful. your ...

wonderful (no time to crit, sorry!) *claps*

hey wiz here i suck at writing crits so, here we go down the track of horror. This poem screams at me. somthing similar happened to me so :smt010 :smt013 ...

cool. i wished i thought of something like this. promise i won't steal *crosses heart with finger*. :arrow: you had nice character descriptions but i felt like i didn't know ...

nice. this has a great use of descriptions. i quite liked it and i cant wait to read more A couple of questions though... 1. This is at the end ...

JC ALL OF A SUDDEN DOESN'T GET THIS AND QUITS

Name: Jean Claude/ JC Age: 15 Grade: 10 Gender: male Physical Appearance: -Nationality: French -Height: 6.2 tall and willowy -Weight: 40 kgs -Hair: jet black hair -Eyes: bright blue -Picture: ...

OK first things first silversun! LOVED IT!!!! :D :D :D your descriptions and emotions run deep. moved me, really! your characters were well described and you show great potential as ...

this is a great base for a story and with the tiniest bit of nitpicking and tweaking you would probably won that vampire competition. Your characters held a great amount ...

hi. i don't know much about poetry but i thought this was wonderful. i always thought that every line has to rhyme. i have no idea what a stanza or ...

review the heck out of it Sunlight streamed through the curtains like golden beams. Dirrella’s eyes fluttered open while the light slowly trickled across her face, with a sigh she ...

LOOOOOOVED IT!!! :thud: absolutely stunning piece. best i have seen on YWS! no jokes. near flawless. everyone got the mistakes so i will leave them but still... loved it! awesome ...

Sunlight streamed through the curtains like golden beams. Dirrella’s eyes fluttered open while the light slowly trickled across her face, with a sigh she swung her legs around and got ...

WOW! LOVED IT! :thud: *does happy/ likes the story dance* You are a great writer. unlike me. I'm rubbish at writing. I need more of this. you must continue! If ...

Great story. I am rubbish with the whole spelling/grammar ranting thing. So i will just talk about your plot. At first i found that you had a great story with ...