wizkid515

The Glade This story has been removed due to author request. Sorry.

Okay story, not amazing but still okay. You need to make us feel her pain. Can't find any spelling or grammer mistakes that haven't already been pointed out. Bon Chance! ...

i liked it. slightly creepy but okay, if that's the point. :D :pirate3: :D :D

Awesome story. cant wait to read more

*shock* this is so wierd, its exactly how i feel. your writing is amazing you a credit to the term writer... thank you for such a great ray of sun ...

not really my sort of thing :| i found it a little disturbing and as said before please rate . :oops: if you like this sort of stuff i suppose ...

WOW! :thud:

hey my name is Wiz welcome to YWS just letting you know that we have a thing down the bottom of the forums called Storybooks. same as your idea move ...

great great great work. i felt the emotion from Rory coming to me while i read. wonderful effort. if you write and get published ill buy your book! :D :D ...

I tattle on Dreamer she is the best and she deserves a million dollars :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

This year i went through a real rough patch. My life seemed like it was destroyed, but then there was Dreamer. She told me something which began my mantra: It ...

Oh... My... God... Wow :thud: this was amazing. would you mind flicking me a PM when the next part is out. keep writing =)

hi. I enjoyed this but, (not to sound to mean), i didn't really get the point. All that happened was the fact that she kept eating and eating and that ...

Hey I was immediately hooked by this story apart from a lack of description. I felt that i didn't know the character enough. I only saw one mistake. Her husband ...

Hey This is a great prologue. You caught my attention as soon as the story started. I felt like I was right there watching the story unfold. I liked how ...