wizkid515

As usual, LOVED IT!!!! Great work in your writing, any things to change have already been metioned. Still can't wait to read chapter 4 even though I back at boarding ...

Hey, I know your gonna love it here. Okay, so you may have noticed some people's user name is a color, here are what the colors stand for. Light Green ...

Welcome to YWS, you're gonna love it. Hope your horror writing takes off. Enjoy the wonders of this amazing site! Feel free to PM any time you need anything!!! Wizkid

Hi there, I'm Wiz and I'll be reviewing you. Nitpicks I wait for the plane from my home to the New World to land. I'm really sorry (shouldn't post it ...

I've posted it with the changes! Hope I didn't miss any :)

Okay. Some of your confusion would be generated by the fact that its doesn't sound like you've read my prologue. I'll get onto some changes soon. Thanks :)

Okay guys, this isn't terribly long but I will continue the chapter once I see if this is good enough. May need some sever editing on my part. Sorry Alec ...

Thanks for that. I should have been more careful. Chapter One will be poster in about an hour so gift it a look if you want to...

Prologue Pain seared across his’s palm, a brilliant light filled his vision. “We are the Academy." Okay, I'm so dreaming, he thought "This is the only safe place for you ...

Pain seared across Alec’s palm, a brilliant light filled his vision. “Alec, we are the Academy. The only safe place for you now, you’ve been marked out as a mage ...

This. Is. Amazing. I have fell in love with your writing. It is amazing, but again I can't find any thing wrong with it. Your descriptions are extraordinarily good. I ...

Okay this won't be terribly helpful but I just couldn't find any mistakes This piece was amazing. I have been searching for a great fantasy piece to look at. I ...

This story was interesting, i enjoyed it but it was a bit gory towards the end. Maybe it's just my stomach but I felt a bit sick imagining that. Good ...

Hey tr3x, Okay so my impressions on this were generally good. I liked the way you described how the shopkeeper seemed to like using his customers. I would have liked ...

Thanks, I love getting nice people reviews :)