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haha thank you, i appreciate your kindness. and no, Mina is not Katniss, though i'd be lying if i told you her character wasn't influenced by the Hunger Games' leading ...

Hehe you're really sweet, thank you :) but I'm sorry to say I won't post any more of this anywhere online. However, if you want to read more chapters, give ...

No worries, I'm not quitting...and I'm aware that at the moment it reads like popular dystopian novels. I know. But that's not the story. It's not about the dystopia. That's ...

didn't mean to sound so bitchy, i was more frustrated than anything :( sorry

wow i sounded really bitchy. i didn't mean to. i was just frustrated. im so sorry about that. i do appreciate that you read my story and took the time ...

i dont think you were mean and i know you're trying to help. really, i do. and i truly appreciate it. i just feel crappy lol. i'd be happy to ...

um...this is the first chapter...naturally im not going to explain everything in the first chapter...i dont want to do a prologue because the way it works is you keep reading ...

...wow. thanks for telling me i suck.

um...wow. you people really make me feel like i suck ass. the whole point about the beginning with the rain was to get across the feeling of her sadness or ...

hey just an explanation about the sentence structure-im a girl, Aiden is a guy. writing him is HARD. my editor told me to go with short sentences and quick observations. ...