windrattlestheblinds

OH GOOD. ...yeah, i like this one a llllot better too. the last version was just... nng... getting more and more broken every time i looked at it :p thanks ...

Hey! Thanks for the review! Madder is a kind of red dye made from madder plants. (Carmine, incidentally, is also a dye, although it%u2019s made from insects rather than plants. ...

Ah, thank you! I'll fix that one and see if any others jump out at me next time I read it over.

I think I changed the opening while you were writing your review, ha. For the better, obviously, since both of you took issue with it. :p Hopefully it's better now? ...

Hey there. Thanks for the review! I poked at the opening some and%u2014hopefully?%u2014made it less-but-still-a-little disorienting. [I do intend for the entire prologue to be a bit disorienting becau

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Thanks for the review! The internet thing piques Vivienne's curiosity because how many 18-year-olds tipped to start at an Ivy League school in the fall have zero online presence? Especially ...

Thanks for the review! And yeah, Vivienne is... nnnnnot a nice person. At all. xD But she'll learn, eventually.

Sure! that'd be cool.

Thanks for the review. :)

Thanks for the feedback!

Towns have political and religious establishments too, as a general rule. Town halls. Courthouses. Billions of churches. Not major temples, more than likely. City/town distinctions have nothing to do

"They" can be used as a singular, gender-neutral pronoun as well as a plural one, actually. It's been used that way since at least Elizabethan/Shakespearean times and probably quite a ...

Ah, thank you for the feedback! The adaption in question is Wonderland: A New Alice. It's a musical, it was terribly and unfairly received (like... I have read not one ...

I have literally no idea how that one sentence got duplicated, because it's not like that in the original document. So. ????? Fixed now, anyway%u2014thank you! And thanks for the ...