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Re: Side by Side
I loved the transition from a simple sketch to black and white then a little color then full out detail. It was like watching one of those old school flip-books. ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Finn's Kingdom (chapter1-short)
Hooray for zombie invasions! I loved it! I can't wait to read what happens next! *watches computer intently for another chapter*
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: My Aborted Child
Fantastic job! I did a super gasp when I came to then ending. It's so sad that thing like this do happen in the real world. It reminds me of ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Beethoven's Virus
Beethoven’s Virus Today was a good day. Today would be a good day for any writer that just sold their first book. Autumn walked down Patterson Street to get to ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Pretty Girls Do Ugly Things
I love it! You could definitely turn this int a dramatic novel!
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Pretty Girls Do Ugly Things
I liked the poem very much. It held a lot of truth that people fail to see. Pretty girls do do ugly things.
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: An Ode To Mathematics
You just spoke to me! That is how I feel about that damned subject. I also like how your poem was short, sweet and to the point.
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Dregan's Path Chapter 1: Trip
Hmmmmm I like it! I like the fact that you're trying to break past the barrier that bi and gays can't have the same passion as heterosexual couples. In the ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Motel 66 (chapter 1)
loved the creepy setting! a few punctuation errors but nothing to serious.
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Suicide
This is just one of those works that just make you want to cry for the poor character. Very well written!
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Hello Again, Christmas.
Hello! Fantastic poem! I could only wish that I was that good! This has got to be my favorite stanza: First snow, that crisp castor sugar, turns To grey, squeaking ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Discarded but kept for... stuff
Very well written. I just wish there was more detail on what happen between the two characters. Maybe more detail on how the main character got in his situation. I ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Big Drama, Big Heart: Chapter One
Chapter One: The Meeting “Katelyn will you calm down? You're acting like you're meeting them for the first time,” Renae' told me in the car on the way to the ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
*Pokes in her head* Hello all! I'm wicked. A devoted fan-girl of anime, yaoi, and Vic Mignona *0*. I just recently got into writing not more than two years ago. ...
Nov 14, 2010
