whitehorse19

Still iffy on the title, and debating on one. Here's the first chapter. Love to know what you think of it. :) Chapter 1 She let her pencil fall across ...

I have to say that children are very hard to draw, and you did a good job with that on the last picture. Also the expression is a very important ...

You have alot more to learn when drawing trees. lol. But people have splatered paint onto a canvas and they call that art so...hmmmm....I guess it is what you believe ...

haha. That's cute. You should see the tea pot I 'tried' to make in art class. I think I will stick with sketching. lol. It's good though, and makes me ...

I like the one of the two children sitting. The clown's creepy! Creepy clown! >< lol. Nice picture though!

This is good for a first time project. I like how you used a flag to cover up her mouth. This says alot considering they say that a picture says ...

Great contrast and use of space. I like the tree. It's different and makes someone think.

Good rhyming. Love the simplicity of it. It's short but too the point. I would suggest adding to it, but that's only my opinion. Like the last line best, and ...

LIke it but it could be longer. Like the person above me said. More description would help. But so far I really like it. Happy Writing.

Red Silk Noose Scars on my wrists Blood red silk Decorate my skin Replace the pain From within Blood lust pain Now meets the skin Relief From the brokenness inside ...