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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Prodigal

    Sorry! Forgot to say this: I don't know how to punctuate a poem, so I didn't. Just though you guys should know the reason!

    Dec 14, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Atrophy For Lovers, Amorphy For Others

    Okay: Loved the description and title (beautiful) especially in the last, um, stanza? paragraph? Well, anyway, a tad confuzzling but heart, heart, heart!

    Dec 7, 2007


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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