white_velvet_on_a_moonlit

Okay: first thing I've posted. This I wrote a while ago and I really hate the beginning. But just let me know what you think. The Prodigal velvet_on_a_moonlit In the ...

This is slightly personal, it's like a memoir in verse. A memory of when I was younger, I'm not sure how old. You know how sometimes you can't stop thinking ...

I'd like some feedback . . . I'm submitting this someplace if you think it's good enough. Unbroken Closed bluebells, holding morning’s promise. Dawn like the sea and shore torn ...