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Re: In an Eggshell
hi I see what you mean being more of a poetry person, it was quite creative, i love the metaphor of the eggshell it was different, interesting. Also like how ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: im new too
today would be my second day, i spent the first day dazed and confused, (i finally read the rules to today, I figured out i had messages to check) but ...
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: Ch.3 of how you say my name, how i say yours
warning this ch.3 of my novel, that i've previously posted before. if you haven't read the intro, ch.1, and ch.2 it may not make much sence. i reccomend you reed ...
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: a cruel reality
hello again, talk about some serious sibling rivalry, I mean I've had some fights with my brothers before but they have never gotten that serious. but beyond that it makes ...
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: The Letter - Chap. 1
I'm serious i love your character they all seem to have a lot personality. your plot is very interesting, I really start to care about what gonna happen to lilly ...
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: Wait...
well writtten, it was short and sweet. concise and to the piont. well done Later
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: Night Rain part 1
it was awesome the detail in night rain was so vivid that i felt I was actually there. the charecter were so strong and 3d I felt i knew them ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: Indigo - chapter 1
your piece seems to have a lot of potential. The scene is so true life, because some time you can't really greive and it feels like you have to put ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: First couple chapter of the novel I'm writing
how you say my name, how I say yours Introduction: Life is good for just us two My mother died when I was born, and as cheesy as it sounds, ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: First couple chapter of the novel I'm writing
how you say my name, how I say yours Introduction: Life is good for just us two My mother died when I was born, and as cheesy as it sounds, ...
Jan 14, 2009
